There are several problems with this for one, Kate never says that they are still not totally lip-locked, so, apparently, they are talking to each other without ever removing their lips from one another. ' at last' he breathed into her, finding her lips Then, there were quotes like this, that don't make any sense at all ( I also used this quote later on, that's how badly I got annoyed) It was like finally getting to what you thought was the top of the mountain to find out that you aren't even a quarter of the way there yet. Then to make things worse, I had to push myself just to get through the last half which I had hoped would be better, and that's never a good thing it just really crawled along unbearably slowly for me. I put the book down several times and didn't read it again for hours because I just couldn't muddle through when she did that. And sadly, it's like that through the whole novel Kate starts writing about one of Luce's time traveling experiences and has me mildly interested, but then she decides to shift gears because she feels like she needs to move on with the story, and does so with no literary grace.

Throughout the whole novel her writing is extremely choppy and awkward to me, it felt like Kate was having a veryyy hard time keeping her train of thought. In order to keep your money from the same sad fate, I have quite a few reasons why you should not buy this book, which turned out to be a huge disappointment: Shhhh! Do you hear that? It's the horrible screams of your money, doomed to spend the rest of their lives with the shame of having been used to purchase this book, and my poor ten dollars are among them. This review can also be found on my blog, Cait's Corner!

Fallen in love by lauren kate